FNAF: SB REWRITTEN - CH 24 (AO3 WRITTEN VERSION AVAILABLE!)

HERE IS CH 23’S CORRECTED LORE VID: https://youtu.be/LCSe2lB_SLs Yeah, things are not looking good for Vanessa in this chapter lol Link to written version: archiveofourown.org/works/45445291?view_full_work=… (currently updated with today’s chapter) Link to next episode: https://youtu.be/zSCH4SELjDg Link to previous episode: https://youtu.be/dlEEupBflcg Link to full playlist: youtube.com/playlist?list=PLKMzqZUiHWUjzZj0jfJym1C…

GREGORY HE'S MOSTLY ALIVE HAUHHH HAOHGH AHH

Well, gregory did what no afton could.....he survived the bite...jesus this is fucking gut wrenching. Thank you so much for making this

23:09-23:40 that's some of the best acting I've ever heard, and to think this did not became canon in FNAF:SB

Updated subject numbers from what I can gather: Subject 1: DJ Music Man Subject 2: Glamrock Bonnie Subject 3: Roxanne Fox Subject 4: Daycare Attendant Subject 5: Either Freddy or Chica Subject 6: Either Freddy or Chica Subject 7: Montgomery Gator

IM SO SCARED YET SO HYPED!! UPDATE: OHMYGOD. BONNY???? WAS RESPONSIBLE FOR WHAT HAPPENED TO????????? OH MY GOD???????? I WONDER IF GREG IS WILLING TO FORGIVE HIM :0 EDIT 2:"SHE CHANGED TACTICS AT BREAKNECK SPEEDS" THIS MADE ME GIGGLE HSHSBDJD

It took me 4 days to catch up with everything and I just gotta say this is FANTASTIC. I’d love what you’ve done and you should feel very proud of yourself. 😁

I love this so far Bonnie has clearly been manipulated his grief and pain of being abandoned is well all coming upon him It's clear that the chip was just enhancing his anger getting rid of his sympathy and just erasing his apathy towards everybody That's the reason he's so confused All of his true emotions are coming up to him The fact that he misses his family The fact that he feels horrible how guilty he feels for what he was trying to do Just like with everyone else the chip brings out your worst traits and it's clear that Bonnie's worst trait was anger and abandonment

YESS IM SO EXCITED Omg no GREGORY 😭 NO BONNIE 😭😭 OMG JAMES IM GOING TO CRY IM SO EEEEEEE

That ending was so good and since Bonnie joined the party Vanny Is going to be screwed like to infinity and beyond levels of being screwed if she survives the story it’s going to take nothing short of a miracle

Bro, I can't handle this. The James thing continues to freaking tear me apart every time it's mentioned and I LOVE THE ANGUISH I COULD SCREAM. ahem.

37:22 I love moments like this

This has been amazing I am literally in tears.

NO VANNY YOU BCSJAGASH LET MY BOY GO GRGRGRGRRR

Oh! I’ve been waiting for this masterpiece to rear its beautiful head!

Im cross faded and im so stoked. Its going to be awesome

YIPPEE Edit: question Kiwi, will you release a reference sheet for Bonnie? I wanted to try to write the fight scene from the 22nd chapter but I don’t wanna get his design wrong-

WAS THAT THE BITE OF 87!?

This whole rewrite made me paranoid....AND I'M LOVING IT!!!!!!💖😅😨🥰❤

I figured out sun and moon: Rewrite I’m listening to, answers= I haven’t figured out yet if Monty is a subject yet. If so I guessing he’s subject 7 Subject 6=Roxy; incident. does not like to lose, talks back, and finds ways to not curse but find loop whole as substitute (September 14 2075) Subject 5=Chica; incident. eating disorder (December 17 2078) Subject 4=Sun and moon; incident. scared of unknown creature/animal: dog (April 7 2073) two people inside this subject Subject 3=Freddie; incident. scared of the dark/ storms (June 20th 2074) (has stage fright) O.N.N. Comet Subject 2=Bonnie; incident. didn’t clean the bowling alley on time (October 11th 2076) O.N.N. Bubblegum Subject 1=Dj; incident. Stood up for Freddie (March 21 2082), but chapter 23’s cannon lore time stamp 6:33 through 6:47 said no connection to past self (there was nothing stating where in the timeline it was posted so it can not be confirmed, nor denied) O.N.N.Snowball O.N.N. Means old nickname Unknown codes? 1. P over 2 2. B over 4 3. M over 7 4. L over 13 I love your rewrite!!!